Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change what happened and why? After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change..... In my book Roy punched dana in the nose because Dana was choking him. I would change the story by not having him punch. Roy would ripped Dana's arms apart to escape. This way Roy would not get in trouble with the pricinpal. Dana would not have to stay home from school.
I'd change in the book that someone stole Cooper book bag. He was wearing a red sweater and he had Cooper's ninja outfit. In the book Zoe likes Cooper but Faith the new student liked him more and then Zoe got jealous. I would change about Zoe getting jealous of Cooper and wanting Faith to get away from him because Zoe did not like Cooper in the first part of the book.
Treasure Hunters 134-162 In my book Bick and his family got in a taxi with this crazy man to a modern building. Then they found their dad's swan which had a secret message on them. They realized they were starving and went to Mc Donalds. After they ate they got into a van with aother strange person. I would change Bick and his family not getting into the strange taxi and van.
today I read the seven wonders. Jack got better and is in hawaii. cass was hired and loves his job. aly is somewhere doing something. I would change the time when jack was thrown out of a airplane.
Tuesday 4/05: is there something you would change ? Title: Divergent I started on page 282. I ended on page 288.
I would change in my book that Tris didn't get tortured by Drew, Peter, and Al. If this didn't happen everything would be normal. They almost threw her into the chasm (a river inside the Dauntless compound)! Four saved her though; she ended up being okay. The only wound she got was a bruise.
Nothing big happened except Raina of course got her ears pierced. she got a surprise from her parents telling her she could do it. raina also found out that her mom peirced her own ears. it's not good. i will have to read more to find out more.
itle: Desmond Pucket How many pages did you read today? 28 Remember to capitalize and write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change the fact that Desmond was carful. Desmond is not that absorptive and does not think a head. He had the chance to go to a theme park and blew his chances of going. I would change his thoughts to think a head and think what would happen.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change what happened and why?
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In my book Roy punched dana in the nose because Dana was choking him. I would change the story by not having him punch. Roy would ripped Dana's arms apart to escape. This way Roy would not get in trouble with the pricinpal. Dana would not have to stay home from school.
I'd change in the book that someone stole Cooper book bag. He was wearing a red sweater and he had Cooper's ninja outfit. In the book Zoe likes Cooper but Faith the new student liked him more and then Zoe got jealous. I would change about Zoe getting jealous of Cooper and wanting Faith to get away from him because Zoe did not like Cooper in the first part of the book.
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In my book Bick and his family got in a taxi with this crazy man to a modern building. Then they found their dad's swan which had a secret message on them. They realized they were starving and went to Mc Donalds. After they ate they got into a van with aother strange person. I would change Bick and his family not getting into the strange taxi and van.
today I read the seven wonders. Jack got better and is in hawaii. cass was hired and loves his job. aly is somewhere doing something. I would change the time when jack was thrown out of a airplane.
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I started on page 282. I ended on page 288.
I would change in my book that Tris didn't get tortured by Drew, Peter, and Al. If this didn't happen everything would be normal. They almost threw her into the chasm (a river inside the Dauntless compound)! Four saved her though; she ended up being okay. The only wound she got was a bruise.
Nothing big happened except Raina of course got her ears pierced. she got a surprise from her parents telling her she could do it. raina also found out that her mom peirced her own ears. it's not good. i will have to read more to find out more.
ReplyDeleteitle: Desmond Pucket
ReplyDeleteHow many pages did you read today? 28
Remember to capitalize and write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change the fact that Desmond was carful. Desmond is not that absorptive and does not think a head. He had the chance to go to a theme park and blew his chances of going. I would change his thoughts to think a head and think what would happen.