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I started on page ___. I ended on page ___.
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What character, scene or plot would you want the author to change in the story? Why?
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What character, scene or plot would you want the author to change in the story? Why?I would want the author to change that the puppies get sick. I don't like when puppies get sick. Also i don't like that the puppies are getting adused. But the rest i like. I would keep reading the series maybe.
ReplyDeleteum i would have the author change when juile fell of the horse and when she got her self hurt and she also had to go to the hospital and i would also change when juile was near the swimming pool she could not swim so i would change thta to.
ReplyDeleteWhat I want the author to change is the picture on the front of the book because it is scary. I also want him to change what the book is called. The murk is a scary name for a book. I want him to also put some pictures in the book. Lastly, I want him to make the words bigger in the book.
ReplyDeleteI think, Sylvester wanted to be elected in the baseball hall of fame. I think he wanted to be in the major leagues. I wanted him to be in the major league and win the world series. I think he is good at baseball. Sylvester wanted to be famous.
ReplyDeleteI would rather have jack in a space ship rather than an old pirate ship. I wan't the setting to be in space. They fight aliens. They always win. They have a hiper space rocket too!
ReplyDeleteI would want the author to make the movie longer. And see if she is ok or does she die? Thats what i would ask. Because it needs to be a little longer... Its so annoying how its not long
ReplyDeleteThe Ability started on page 23 ended on page 29
ReplyDeleteI would want in the book to change how the government operates in this book because I want to see apart of the government as dark and shady to show how corrupt the government is. Another thing I want changed is more story and mystery about the school. Next, I want changed Chris's father didn't die in the war. Also, what should be changed is more mean teachers to put stress on Chris for some interesting commentary. Finally, what I want changed is Chris's mother getting more motivation in her life to do something.
The lost hero
ReplyDeleteIn my story they're on a boat it is flying over to Greece. They are being chased by the Romans and they're catching up. In my story I wish the author change it from seven demigods to the whole camps. I wish you had another book before I can explain it better. I wish coat hedge is not there.
Big Nate: The Crowd Goes Wild
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I would want the author to change Gina to a nice character. Gina is always mean to Nate, and is the favorite of Mrs. Godfrey. Gina always has to prove Nate wrong. Mrs. Godfrey always agree's with her and never Nate.
Title: ___ Harry potter book one__
ReplyDeleteI started on page _135__. I ended on page __140_.
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What character, scene or plot would you want the author to change in the story? Why?
I wish Harry's parents would not of died. The reason why I don't want Harry's parents to die it Is because he doesn't have to live with his cousin. I also think it would be good bonding. I mean how often do you get to meet your parents. I can't wait for Harry to meet his parents in heaven.
Thursday, Nov 3: I wish the author would change.....
ReplyDeleteTitle: Catching Fire
I started on page 380. I ended on page 391 (end of book).
If I had to change a character, scene, or plot, I would change that Peeta had been picked up by a District 13 hovercraft and not a Capital hovercraft. At the end of the games Katniss exploded the force field that goes into the real world. After that she got picked up by a hovercraft that is taking her to District 13, which is rebellion against the capital. However, Peeta got picked up by a Capital hovercraft. Peeta will be forced to ask questions he doesn't know. I would change that because Katniss wishes that Peeta was with her.
Title: Thea Stilton
ReplyDeleteI started on page __68_. I ended on page ___.
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What character, scene or plot would you want the author to change in the story? Why?
I want the author to change a relationship. Palm and Will like each other with love. I hate it. It messes with the story. It sucks seeing them act that way.
I ended on page 86
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