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I started on page _________. I ended on page __________.
Please write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your
paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change
what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change.
Title: Treasure Hunters Danger Down the Nile
ReplyDeleteI started on page 135. I ended on page 139.
Please write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your
paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change
what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change. the kids are going inside a pyramid to find some clues to where their moms friends. If i could change the story i would change how they thing that their parents are dead. Also i would change how they have so many enemies and villains because they have a lot of enemies. Also i would change how they have to go to so many scary places like under water and like inside a pyramid.
Nothing is changing in my book its all same. I would change the book to make it more interesting. She is still working on her blog. I wish i choose a different book. Zoella is a good youtuber.
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ReplyDelete109 through 116
Raina was getting in the car to see her dad at the airport. Raina asked her mom what the problem between her and her dad. She said" Your dad and I are talking about what is going to happen". She did not want to fight with her sister anymore. Her friends can help her with her family problems at school when they come back from vacation.
I will change that Raina and Amara will not fight anymore.
ReplyDeleteThe Maze Runner started on page 50 ended on page 58
ReplyDeleteI would change Chuck dying because. I hated the moment when he had a knife thrown at him and it made me cry. He should have lived because he was the nicest character and was my favorite. Also he would help in the story because the would look at the positives. He would also help everyone get through no matter how awful the situation. Finally I Would love to see him interact with the others.
Title: GG
ReplyDeleteI started on page _________. I ended on page __________.
Please write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your
paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change
what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change. I would change that the boy had to ride his bike for an hour to get to the house. Also i would change that the boy hates his life. Its a bit depressing when you hate your life. I don't like that the mom is mean.
Tuesday, 4/19/16: is there something you would change ?
ReplyDeleteTitle: The Hunger Games
I started on page 79. I ended on page 86.
I would change that Katniss had helped the redheaded girl before she was caught by the Capital. The redheaded girl now has her tongue cut and now is a servant in The Training Center. Years ago, Katniss and Gale were hunting and a bird gave out a warning call. The redheaded girl and a boy were running. Then a helicopter came and dropped a net on them.
Title: Quest for the diamond sword
ReplyDeleteI started on page ____253_____. I ended on page _____483_____.
Please write 5 grammatically correct sentences.
Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your
paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change
what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change.
In the book I would change the way Steve reacts to stuff. He is very selfish. I wish that he would change a lot. He is so greaty.
Bone the 3rd book
ReplyDeleteFinished the book
jack Morea
i would change how bones brother acts. I would make him goofy. also funny and not angry. Maybe i would make him a bit nicer maybe. Also make him nicer to bone.
The hunger games
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I would change the plot because they expect us to believe that the capital is completly dependent on the districts. They have to have some way to get energy. They are supposed to be on the future. Come on people.
Sisters
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Raina’s mom came back from the man that to her to get something for her car. Amara said that she got her snake that as been lost in the car. Raina’s mom was very proud of her for getting the snake from the car. She wanted to know why they had to meet their dad at the airport this afternoon. Her mom said We did not have things for each other anymore so yeah”.
I changed that Raina's mom and father are not getting a divorce.